EPT Essay
We as people tend to admire and follow other
people who live a life we won’t ever get to live. We look up to the ones with wealth, beauty and
other riches we don’t possess.
I ask myself why doesn’t Kim kardashian for
example look up to any of the people i come from. It’s maybe because we are not
"interesting" enough or maybe simply because we are poor. She might
think we don’t have anything to offer. If you were to
ask anyone in my community or even my generation they would all know who Kim
kardashian is, they would start talking about how wealthy she is or how
stunning she looks there would be so many comments positive or negative about
her.
The rich and famous rarely ever do anything for
the people. They don’t look up to us yet we see them as leaders, idols and
people we one day want to become. What
have they ever done for us? They don’t treat us like prizes. We give all our
attention on those who don’t deserve it.
We tend to ignore the people in our own shoes. There are people who are the real leaders and heroes in our community.
We tend to ignore the people in our own shoes. There are people who are the real leaders and heroes in our community.
In this passage it states "we tend to
regard the success of people at hand, within our own small group, as a
threat" this quotes stands out to me because we as a community recognize
someone’s success yet we see them as a threat as if they are better than us. We
don’t like to see people in the same situation as ourselves and see them rise
while we fail if one fails everyone around them must fail as well like that
saying " misery loves company" as soon as we see someone doing better
we quickly start to judge and envy. We shouldn’t stop these people from trying
we should be upset at ourselves
for doing anything ourselves. We praise people in this world who don’t deserve
it. We need to start valuing and supporting the real leaders of this
world. Our society and mentality is so messed up in the head its crazy, a
change needs to be done and we need to do it now.
This essay needs to be longer and you need longer paragraphs.
ReplyDeletegreat essay with great detail love the creativity
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ReplyDeleteGood essay, very well written with good grammar, and no spell errors. You had a great argument and did well with backing it up with quotations, and explaining what they meant.
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